Comments on: Podolski’s late strike spares German blushes http://germany.footballblog.co.uk/54.html 2010 World Cup from BlogsFC Tue, 24 Nov 2009 09:03:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Challenge Feedback http://germany.footballblog.co.uk/54.html/comment-page-1#comment-550 Challenge Feedback Tue, 24 Nov 2009 09:03:15 +0000 http://germany.footballblog.co.uk/?p=54#comment-550 Good title and synopsis. Shame you couldn't have used a picture of Doumbia Seydou in an Ivory Coast shirt. Felt there were lots of short sentences, that perhaps didn't need to be and you could have linked them with commas. Good overall read, I got a sense of the game and the real importance of the day. Put together well. comitted > committed influencial > influential Good title and synopsis.
Shame you couldn’t have used a picture of Doumbia Seydou in an Ivory Coast shirt.
Felt there were lots of short sentences, that perhaps didn’t need to be and you could have linked them with commas.
Good overall read, I got a sense of the game and the real importance of the day. Put together well.

comitted > committed
influencial > influential

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